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My life is so perfect, I must be god
Don’t lay down at my feet or pretend I’m not odd
Don’t patronise me, or follow my rights and wrongs
I’m but an ageless singer singing my song
I don’t know what I was meant to do
But if everything’s perfect, it can’t be true
I’ve got too much power I’m not under control
I can fly over mountains, why do I hide in a hole?
Everyone’s out there, waiting to be met
Why do I hide out here, like the world is a set
and I’m but an actor caught with stage-fright.
Afraid of the dark, and afraid of the light.
Afraid of what I can be, afraid of what I’m not
Afraid of the dreams where I think I’ll be shot
Afraid of the dreams, where there’s power beyond control
Afraid of the perfect life I’ve been bestowed.
I remember sitting, looking at my life, feeling awed.
and I thought to myself: wow. I must be god.
©2005-2009 ~rebelicious
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:iconorunitia:
That is really really good... :+fav:

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I have lived a life of two,
Seen a dream broken
Crossed a stream unwettened
And watched as the sky
Turned amber and blue.
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:iconrebelicious:
thank you! :D i'm gonna mosy on over to your gallery, thanks for the fave :D

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:iconorunitia:
your very welcome! :)

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I have lived a life of two,
Seen a dream broken
Crossed a stream unwettened
And watched as the sky
Turned amber and blue.
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:iconrebelicious:
hey it looks like you have some cool looking story or something going on, is that what you do mostly for your deviations?

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:iconorunitia:
im more of a peot. i just finished my first short story called final journey of the orion (FJotO). I have ran out of inspiration to keep writting my poems... nothing really to write about. but i started writting my continuing stort Red vultures which takes place after FJotO. Im turning out to be just an all out writer. Personaly im thinking about switching to become an english major.

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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I have lived a life of two,
Seen a dream broken
Crossed a stream unwettened
And watched as the sky
Turned amber and blue.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
:iconrebelicious:
hey that sounds really cool :D where do you get the inspiration for your writing, if you've ran out of it for your poetry? definitely go for the english major if you truly enjoy your writing, and wouldn't get tired of it -- sounds like the right type of thing for you

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,¸¸,ø¤º°`°º¤ø,¸¸,
°º¤ø,¸₪ ®℮b℮l أ© أous ♥
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:iconorunitia:
most of my inspiration comes from emotion and what life is showing me. for example i wrote ghost of the past after my ex left me. it was very very sad to say the least. mostly everything i write about has happened to me in one way or another. or i write about people and how they are through my eyes.

most of my work is sad becuase that all i really know how to write about. i have a couple happy pieces but they are very sparse. i can only write when im sad, and right now, im not sad.

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I have lived a life of two,
Seen a dream broken
Crossed a stream unwettened
And watched as the sky
Turned amber and blue.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
:iconrosswell:
incredible......instant fav.....that is all I can say.....its....its....its.....its just incredible.
:iconrebelicious:
lol thanks :D you were kinda a part-inspiration on that one actually, because that's where the 'i must be god' came from.. if u weren't there, this poem might be non-existent :P

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,¸¸,ø¤º°`°º¤ø,¸¸,
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₪¸,ø¤º°`°º¤ø,¸¸,ø¤º°
°`°`°º¤ø,¸¸,ø¤º°`°º¤ø,¸¸,ø¤º°` °`°
°º¤ø,¸,ø¤º°`°º¤ø,¸¸,ø¤º°
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